Rhetoric & Technical Communication
Rhetoric & Technical Communication
Toscano, Aaron, Ph.D., Associate Professor, Dept. of English

Resources and Daily Activities

  • Conference Presentations
    • PCA/ACA Conference Presentation 2022
    • PCAS/ACAS Presentation 2021
    • SEACS 2021 Presentation
  • Dr. Toscano’s Homepage
  • ENGL 2116-082: Introduction to Technical Communication
    • ENGL 2116 sec. 082 Major Assignments (Summer 2021)
      • Final Portfolio Requirements
      • Making Résumés and Cover Letters More Effective
      • Oral Presentations
      • Research
    • June 14th: Information Design
    • June 15th: Proposals, Marketing, and Rhetoric
    • June 17th: More I, Robot and Science Fiction in a Technical Communication context Discussion
    • June 1st: Plain Language and Prose Revision
      • Euphemisms
      • Prose Practice for Next Class
      • Prose Revision Assignment
      • Revising Prose: Efficiency, Accuracy, and Good
      • Sentence Clarity
    • June 21st: Ethics and Perspective Discussion
      • Ethical Dilemmas for Homework
      • Ethical Dilemmas to Ponder
      • Mapping Our Personal Ethics
    • June 22nd: More on Ethics
    • June 2nd: More on Plain Language
    • June 3rd: Review Prose Revision
    • June 7th: Effective Documents for Users
    • June 8th: Final Project and Research Discussion
      • Epistemology and Other Fun Research Ideas
    • June 9th: Technology in a Social Context
    • May 24th: Introduction to the course
    • May 25th: Critical Technological Awareness
    • May 26th: Audience, Purpose, and General Introduction
    • May 27th: Résumé Stuff
      • Duty Format for Résumés
      • Peter Profit’s Cover Letter
    • May 31st: More Resume Stuff
  • ENGL 4182/5182: Information Design & Digital Publishing
    • August 21st: Introduction to the Course
      • Rhetorical Principles of Information Design
    • August 28th: Introduction to Information Design
      • Prejudice and Rhetoric
      • Robin Williams’s Principles of Design
    • Classmates Webpages (Fall 2017)
    • December 4th: Presentations
    • Major Assignments for ENGL 4182/5182 (Fall 2017)
    • November 13th: More on Color
      • Designing with Color
      • Important Images
    • November 20th: Extra-Textual Elements
    • November 27th: Presentation/Portfolio Workshop
    • November 6th: In Living Color
    • October 16th: Type Fever
      • Typography
    • October 23rd: More on Type
    • October 2nd: MIDTERM FUN!!!
    • October 30th: Working with Graphics
      • Beerknurd Calendar 2018
    • September 11th: Talking about Design without Using “Thingy”
      • Theory, theory, practice
    • September 18th: The Whole Document
    • September 25th: Page Design
  • ENGL 4183/5183: Editing with Digital Technologies
    • August 26th: Introduction to the Class
    • December 2nd: Last Day of “Class”
    • Major Assignments for ENGL 4183/5183 (Fall 2021)
      • Rhetoric of Fear
    • November 11th: Cohesive Rhythm
    • November 18th: Voice and Other Nebulous Writing Terms
      • Finding Dominant Rhetorical Appeals
    • November 4th: Rhetorical Effects of Punctuation
    • October 14th: Choosing Adjectivals
    • October 21st: Choosing Nominals
    • October 28th: Stylistic Variations
      • Revising Prose: Efficiency, Accuracy, and Good
    • October 7th: Midterm Exam
    • September 16th: Verb is the Word!
    • September 23rd: Coordination and Subordination
      • A Practical Editing Situation
    • September 2nd: Rhetoric, Words, and Composing
    • September 30th: Form and Function
    • September 9th: Sentence Patterns
  • ENGL 4275: Rhetoric of Technology
    • April 13th: Authorities in Science and Technology
    • April 15th: Articles on Violence in Video Games
    • April 20th: Presentations
    • April 6th: Technology in the home
    • April 8th: Writing Discussion
    • Assignments for ENGL 4275
    • February 10th: Religion of Technology Part 3 of 3
    • February 12th: Is Love a Technology?
    • February 17th: Technology and Gender
    • February 19th: Technology and Expediency
    • February 24th: Semester Review
    • February 3rd: Religion of Technology Part 1 of 3
    • February 5th: Religion of Technology Part 2 of 3
    • January 13th: Technology and Meaning, a Humanist perspective
    • January 15th: Technology and Democracy
    • January 22nd: The Politics of Technology
    • January 27th: Discussion on Writing as Thinking
    • January 29th: Technology and Postmodernism
    • January 8th: Introduction to the Course
    • March 11th: Writing and Other Fun
    • March 16th: Neuromancer (1984) Day 1 of 2
    • March 18th: Neuromancer (1984) Day 2 of 2
    • March 23rd: Inception (2010)
    • March 25th: Writing and Reflecting Discussion
    • March 30th & April 1st: Count Zero
    • March 9th: William Gibson’s Neuromancer (1984)
  • ENGL 6166: Rhetorical Theory
    • April 12th: Knoblauch. Ch. 4 and Ch. 5
    • April 19th: Jacques Derrida’s Positions
    • April 26th:  Feminisms and Rhetorics
    • April 5th: Knoblauch. Ch. 3 and More Constitutive Rhetoric
    • February 15th: Isocrates (Part 2)
    • February 1st: Aristotle’s On Rhetoric Books 2 & 3
      • Aristotle’s On Rhetoric, Book 2
      • Aristotle’s On Rhetoric, Book 3
    • February 22nd: St. Augustine’s On Christian Doctrine [Rhetoric]
    • February 8th: Isocrates (Part 1)-2nd Half of Class
    • January 11th: Introduction to Class
    • January 18th: Plato’s Phaedrus
    • January 25th: Aristotle’s On Rhetoric Book 1
    • March 15th: Descartes, Rene, Discourse on Method
    • March 1st: Knoblauch. Ch. 1 and 2
    • March 22nd: Mary Wollstonecraft
    • March 29th: Second Wave Feminist Rhetoric
    • May 3rd: Knoblauch. Ch. 6, 7, and “Afterword”
    • Rhetorical Theory Assignments
  • LBST 2212-124, 125, 126, & 127
    • August 21st: Introduction to Class
    • August 23rd: Humanistic Approach to Science Fiction
    • August 26th: Robots and Zombies
    • August 28th: Futurism, an Introduction
    • August 30th: R. A. Lafferty “Slow Tuesday Night” (1965)
    • December 2nd: Technological Augmentation
    • December 4th: Posthumanism
    • November 11th: Salt Fish Girl (Week 2)
    • November 13th: Salt Fish Girl (Week 2 con’t)
    • November 18th: The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy (Part 1)
      • More Questions than Answers
    • November 1st: Games Reality Plays (part II)
    • November 20th: The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy (Part 2)
    • November 6th: Salt Fish Girl (Week 1)
    • October 14th: More Autonomous Fun
    • October 16th: Autonomous Conclusion
    • October 21st: Sci Fi in the Domestic Sphere
    • October 23rd: Social Aphasia
    • October 25th: Dust in the Wind
    • October 28th: Gender Liminality and Roles
    • October 2nd: Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein
    • October 30th: Games Reality Plays (part I)
    • October 9th: Approaching Autonomous
      • Analyzing Prose in Autonomous
    • September 11th: The Time Machine
    • September 16th: The Alien Other
    • September 18th: Post-apocalyptic Worlds
    • September 20th: Dystopian Visions
    • September 23rd: World’s Beyond
    • September 25th: Gender Studies and Science Fiction
    • September 30th: Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein
    • September 4th: Science Fiction and Social Breakdown
      • More on Ellison
      • More on Forster
    • September 9th: The Time Machine
  • LBST 2213-110: Science, Technology, and Society
    • August 24th: Science and Technology from a Humanistic Perspective
    • August 26th: More Introduction
    • August 31st: Collins & Pinch’s The Golem (Science), Prefaces and Ch. 1
    • December 2nd: Violence in Video Games
    • December 7th: Video Games and Violence, a more nuanced view
    • November 11th: Boulle, Pierre. Planet of the Apes. (1964) Ch. 18-26
    • November 16th: Boulle, Pierre. Planet of the Apes. (1964) Ch. 27-end
    • November 18th: Shelley, Mary. Frankenstein. 1818. Preface-Ch. 8
    • November 23rd: Shelley, Mary. Frankenstein. 1818. Ch. 9-Ch. 16
    • November 2nd: Wells, H. G. The Time Machine Ch. 6-The End
    • November 30th: Shelley, Mary. Frankenstein. 1818. Ch. 17-Ch. 24
      • Dayna’s Frankenstein Class Notes
    • November 9th: Boulle, Pierre. Planet of the Apes. (1964) Ch. 1-17
    • October 14th: Lies Economists Tell
    • October 19th: Brief Histories of Medicine, Salerno, and Galen readings
    • October 21st: Politicization of Science
    • October 26th: COVID-19 Facial Covering Rhetoric
    • October 28th: Wells, H. G. Time Machine. Ch. 1-5
    • October 5th: Collins & Pinch’s The Golem at Large (Technology), Ch. 7 and Conclusion
    • September 14th: Collins & Pinch’s The Golem (Science), Ch. 7 and Conclusion
    • September 16th: Test 1
    • September 21st: The Golem at Large (Technology), Prefaces and Ch. 1
    • September 28th: Collins & Pinch’s The Golem at Large (Technology), Ch. 2
    • September 2nd: Collins & Pinch’s The Golem (Science), Ch. 2
    • September 30th: Collins & Pinch’s The Golem at Large (Technology), Ch. 5 and 6
    • September 7th: Collins & Pinch’s The Golem (Science), Ch. 3 and 4
    • September 9th: Collins & Pinch’s The Golem (Science), Ch. 5 and 6
  • New Media: Gender, Culture, Technology (Spring 2021)
    • April 13th: Virtually ‘Real’ Environments
    • April 20th: Rhetoric/Composition Defines New Media
    • April 27th: Sub/Cultural Politics, Hegemony, and Agency
    • April 6th: Capitalist Realism
    • February 16: Misunderstanding the Internet
    • February 23rd: Our Public Sphere and the Media
    • February 2nd: Introduction to Cultural Studies
    • January 26th: Introduction to New Media
    • Major Assignments for New Media (Spring 2021)
    • March 16th: Identity Politics
    • March 23rd: Social Construction of Gender and Sexuality
    • March 2nd: Foundational Thinkers in Cultural Studies
    • March 30th: Hyperreality
    • March 9th: Globalization & Postmodernism
    • May 4th: Wrapping Up The Semester
      • Jodi Dean “The The Illusion of Democracy” & “Communicative Capitalism”
      • Social Construction of Sexuality
  • Science Fiction in American Culture (Summer I–2020)
    • Assignments for Science Fiction in American Culture
    • Cultural Studies and Science Fiction Films
    • June 10th: Interstellar and Exploration themes
    • June 11th: Bicentennial Man
    • June 15th: I’m Only Human…Or am I?
    • June 16th: Wall-E and Environment
    • June 17th: Wall-E (2008) and Technology
    • June 18th: Interactivity in Video Games
    • June 1st: Firefly (2002) and Myth
    • June 2nd: “Johnny Mnemonic”
    • June 3rd: “New Rose Hotel”
    • June 4th: “Burning Chrome”
    • June 8th: Conformity and Monotony
    • June 9th: Cultural Constructions of Beauty
    • May 18th: Introduction to Class
    • May 19th: American Culture, an Introduction
    • May 20th: The Matrix
    • May 21st: Gender and Science Fiction
    • May 25th: Goals for I, Robot
    • May 26th: Isaac Asimov’s I, Robot
    • May 27th: Hackers and Slackers
    • May 30th: Inception
  • Teaching Portfolio
  • Topics for Analysis
    • American Culture, an Introduction
    • Efficiency in Writing Reviews
    • Feminism, An Introduction
    • Fordism/Taylorism
    • Frankenstein Part I
    • Frankenstein Part II
    • Futurism Introduction
    • Langdon Winner Summary: The Politics of Technology
    • Marxist Theory (cultural analysis)
    • Oral Presentations
    • Oratory and Argument Analysis
    • Our Public Sphere
    • Postmodernism Introduction
    • Protesting Confederate Place
    • Punctuation Refresher
    • QT, the Existential Robot
    • Religion of Technology Discussion
    • Rhetoric, an Introduction
      • Analyzing the Culture of Technical Writer Ads
      • Rhetoric of Technology
      • Visual Culture
      • Visual Perception
      • Visual Perception, Culture, and Rhetoric
      • Visual Rhetoric
      • Visuals for Technical Communication
      • World War I Propaganda
    • The Great I, Robot Discussion
      • I, Robot Short Essay Topics
    • The Rhetoric of Video Games: A Cultural Perspective
      • Civilization, an Analysis
    • The Sopranos
    • Video Games and Violent Behavior: The Specious Link
    • Why Science Fiction?
    • Zombies and Consumption Satire
  • Video Games & American Culture
    • April 14th: Phallocentrism
    • April 21st: Video Games and Neoliberalism
    • April 7th: Video Games and Conquest
    • Assignments for Video Games & American Culture
    • February 10th: Aesthetics and Culture
    • February 17th: Narrative and Catharsis
    • February 24th: Serious Games
    • February 3rd: More History of Video Games
    • January 13th: Introduction to the course
    • January 20th: Introduction to Video Game Studies
    • January 27th: Games & Culture
      • Marxism for Video Game Analysis
      • Postmodernism for Video Game Analysis
    • March 24th: Realism, Interpretation(s), and Meaning Making
    • March 31st: Feminist Perspectives and Politics
    • March 3rd: Risky Business?

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Topics for Analysis » Frankenstein Part II

Frankenstein Part II

Plan for the day

  • Frankenstein and Science
  • Shelley’s Warning(s)
  • Look at your Canvas Prompt

The Modern Prometheus

The second title to this novel is The Modern Prometheus. Although there is slight ambiguity here, I believe “the modern Prometheus” is Victor Frankenstein and not the monster* he created. How about a brief recap of the story of Prometheus? What is the relationship to the novel and the overall, big picture for science and technology?

*The creature isn’t really a monster as we learn. He’s a golem that wasn’t cultivated but scorned by humanity. It became what people said it was.

Captain Walton’s Adventure

As we discussed, Captain Walton parallels Victor Frankenstein’s story because Walton also sets out on a perilous endeavor that, if taken to its “logical” conclusion in light of Shelley’s warning, will destroy him. Let’s consider some of themes. As usual, we’ll avoid controversial subjects.

Feminist reading

Let me set the stage for you. Capt. Walton wants to show he’s a big boy and can do something great. The actual “great” thing isn’t specified, but it’s most likely a generic substitution for conquest. Mary Shelley was no stranger to (proto-)feminism, and the novel comments on science, technology, and adventure being male-dominated activities. A reading on this is that Shelley wants readers to not ignore woman’s contributions to humanity.

  • “A youth passed in solitude, my best years spent under your gentle and feminine fosterage, has so refined the groundwork of my character that I cannot overcome an intense distaste to the usual brutality exercised on board ship.” (Preface, Letter II, para. 4)
  • “How gladly I would sacrifice my fortune, my existence, my every hope, to the furtherance of my enterprise. One man’s life or death were but a small price to pay for the acquirement of the knowledge which I sought; for the dominion I should acquire and transmit over the elemental foes of our race.” (Preface, Letter V, para. 2)
  • Victor tells Capt. Walton, “You seek for knowledge and wisdom, as I once did; and I ardently hope that the gratification of your wishes may not be a serpent to sting you, as mine has been.” (Preface, Letter VI, para. 1)
  • “[Victor’s mother] presented Elizabeth to me as her promised gift, I, with childish seriousness, interpreted her words literally, and looked upon Elizabeth as mine–mine to protect, love, and cherish….till death she was to be mine only.” (Chapter 1, para. 11)
  • “Elizabeth was of a calmer and more concentrated disposition….She busied herself with following the aerial creations of the poets; and in the majestic and wondrous scenes which surrounded our Swiss home–the sublime shapes of the mountains; the changes of the seasons; tempest and calm; the silence of winter, and the life and turbulence of our Alpine summers–she found ample scope for admiration and delight.” (Chapter 2, para. 1)
  • “I was capable of a more intense application, and was more deeply smitten with the thirst for knowledge….Curiosity, earnest research to learn the hidden laws of nature…are among the earliest sensations I can remember.” (Chapter 2, para. 1)

The last two points show Victors cold, but inquisitive, scientific mind and Elizabeth’s humanistic lens to view the world. Later in the novel (end of Ch. 9 and beginning of Ch. 10), Victor :

  • “The immense mountains and precipices that overhung me on every side–the sound of the river raging among the rocks, and the dashing of the waterfalls around, spoke of a power mighty as Omnipotence–and I ceased to fear, or to bend before any being less almighty than that which had created and ruled the elements.” (Chapter 9, para. 13)
  • “Through the silent working of immutable laws….These sublime and magnificent scenes afforded me the greatest consolation that I was capable of receiving. They elevated me from all littleness of feeling; and although they did not remove my grief, they subdued and tranquillised it.” (Chapter 10, para. 1)

In the presence of what he believes an omnipotent deity created, he is humbled and serene.

Thirst for Scientific Knowledge

  • “It was the secrets of heaven and earth that I desired to learn…still my inquiries were directed to the metaphysical, or, in its highest sense, the physical secrets of the world.” (Chapter 2, para. 4)
  • “My father was not scientific, and I was left to struggle with a child’s blindness, added to a student’s thirst for knowledge.” (Chapter 2, para. 11)
  • “I was occupied by exploded systems, mingling, like an unadept, a thousand contradictory theories, and floundering desperately in a very slough of multifarious knowledge, guided by an ardent imagination and childish reasoning.” (Chapter 2, para. 12)
  • “[Henry Clerval’s] father was a narrow-minded trader, and saw idleness and ruin in the aspirations and ambition of his son. Henry deeply felt the misfortune of being debarred from a liberal education.” He had a “firm resolve not to be chained to the miserable details of commerce.” (Chapter 3, para. 5)

Notice how Victor dismisses commerce–an allusion to practical endeavors–in favor of pure science or knowledge for the sake of knowledge.

Peer Review

  • “M. Krempe, professor of natural philosophy. He was an uncouth man, but deeply embued in the secrets of his science.” (Chapter 3, para. 9)
  • “M. Krempe was a little squat man, with a gruff voice and a repulsive countenance; the teacher, therefore, did not prepossess me in favour of his pursuits.” (Chapter 3, para. 12)
  • “I had a contempt for the uses of modern natural philosophy. It was very different when the masters of the science sought immortality and power; such views, although futile, were grand: but now the scene was changed. The ambition of the inquirer seemed to limit itself to the annihilation of those visions on which my interest in science was chiefly founded. I was required to exchange chimeras of boundless grandeur for realities of little worth.” (Chapter 3, para. 12)
  • M. Waldman tells Victor, “The labours of men of genius, however erroneously directed, scarcely ever fail in ultimately turning to the solid advantage of mankind.” (Chapter 3, para. 17)
  • M. Waldman advises Victor on his studies: “A man would make but a very sorry chemist if he attended to that department of human knowledge alone. If your wish is to become really a man of science, and not merely a petty experimentalist, I should advise you to apply to every branch of natural philosophy, including mathematics.” (Chapter 3, para. 18)
  • “Two years passed in this manner, during which I paid no visit to Geneva….In other studies you go as far as others have gone before you, and there is nothing more to know; but in a scientific pursuit there is continual food for discovery and wonder….I made some discoveries in the improvement of some chemical instruments which procured me great esteem and admiration at the university.” (Chapter 4, para. 2)

At the exclusion of his family and other endeavors, Victor goes head first into his research. He’s good, but he has few peers. Why is that important to mention?

The Creator

  • “A new species would bless me as its creator and source; many happy and excellent natures would owe their being to me. No father could claim the gratitude of his child so completely as I should deserve theirs.” (Chapter 4, para. 8)
  • “I beheld the wretch — the miserable monster whom I had created…. the demoniacal corpse to which I had so miserably given life.” (Chapter 5, para. 3)
  • Victor travels back home to a frightful encounter. Check out the Map.
  • “During this short voyage I saw the lightnings playing on the summit of Mont Blanc in the most beautiful figures.” (Chapter 7, para. 23)
    I think Mont Blanc’s a bit far away…
  • “A flash of lightning illuminated the object, and discovered its shape plainly to me; its gigantic stature, and the deformity of its aspect, more hideous than belongs to humanity, instantly informed me that it was the wretch, the filthy daemon, to whom I had given life.” (Chapter 7, para. 25)

The Golem

  • “I had been the author of unalterable evils; and I lived in daily fear, lest the monster whom I had created should perpetrate some new wickedness. I had an obscure feeling that all was not over, and that he would still commit some signal crime, which by its enormity should almost efface the recollection of the past.” (Chapter 9, para. 6)
  • “I am thy creature; I ought to be thy Adam; but I am rather the fallen angel, whom thou drivest from joy for no misdeed. Everywhere I see bliss, from which I alone am irrevocably excluded. I was benevolent and good; misery made me a fiend. Make me happy, and I shall again be virtuous.” (Chapter 10, para. 11)
  • “I was oppressed by cold, I found a fire which had been left by some wandering beggars, and was overcome with delight at the warmth I experienced from it. In my joy I thrust my hand into the live embers, but quickly drew it out again with a cry of pain. How strange, I thought, that the same cause should produce such opposite effects!” (Chapter 11, para. 6)
  • “Was man, indeed, at once so powerful, so virtuous and magnificent, yet so vicious and base? He appeared at one time a mere scion of the evil principle, and at another as all that can be conceived of noble and godlike.”(Chapter 13, para. 15)
  • “But where were my friends and relations? No father had watched my infant days, no mother had blessed me with smiles and caresses.” (Chapter 13, para. 21)
  • “I was unformed in mind; I was dependent on none and related to none. ‘The path of my departure was free;’ and there was none to lament my annihilation.” (Chapter 15, para. 5)
  • “Many things I read surpassed my understanding and experience. I had a very confused knowledge of kingdoms, wide extents of country, mighty rivers, and boundless seas. But I was perfectly unacquainted with towns, and large assemblages of men.” (Chapter 15, para. 6)
  • “I read of men concerned in public affairs, governing or massacring their species….perhaps, if my first introduction to humanity had been made by a young soldier, burning for glory and slaughter, I should have been imbued with different sensations.” (Chapter 15, para. 6)
  • “I revolved many projects; but that on which I finally fixed was, to enter the dwelling when the blind old man should be alone.” (Chapter 15, para. 13)

Well, we know what happens after he confronts the old man, De Lacey. I include that because the Monster contemplates a variety of hypotheses on how to approach his “hosts.” Unfortunately, he had an all or nothing plan. In a sense, he had to experiment in public, and it went awry.

  • The Monster begins to control his creator: “Slave….I can make you so wretched that the light of day will be hateful to you. You are my creator, but I am your master;–obey!” (Chapter 20, para. 11)

Shelley’s Warning

The most obvious warning is the when men remove women from a “natural” event–childbirth–you end up with a creature you can’t handle. The monster’s father abandoned him and there was no one to nurture or teach him. Shelley’s mother, Mary Wollstonecraft, wanted to make sure women were educated in order to be better partners to men (that was a major justification for her argument for more women’s rights). It’s likely that Shelley is warning scientists and inventors–nearly universally male in the early 19th Century–not to impose a single gendered lens on their endeavors. They ought to consider feminine perspectives as well. Once you create something, you have to take care of it.

Future Stuff

Tomorrow is the last activity I have for us, and it’s watching a music video and a video game walkthrough. Don’t forget to do your Canvas posts before 6/22 at 11:00 pm.

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